I once knew a man
Named Johnny McGee.
He lived down the road
A couple houses from me.
He worked hard in the week,
But weekend parties didn’t end.
He had so much money
That he was eager to spend.
His house was quite grand;
His car was the best,
On his property: a boat and more
Grown-up toys filled the rest.
He was that man
That men wanted to be,
And women loved to be with
To live frivolously.
After a few years
Watching this week after week,
I noticed action was gone.
Things seemed to look bleak.
I wondered what happened;
Why the house had no noise.
Where were the people
Who played with the toys.
The grass grew tall
Around the house in the lawn.
The boat no longer moved.
The parties were gone.
The quiet was quite nice
But yet unsettling too.
Were things going okay
For Johnny and his crew?
I prayed for my neighbor,
Then I wanted to see
What may have happened
To Johnny McGee.
I took a deep breath
And walked to his place.
I knocked on the door
To see him face to face.
A grouchy voice hollered,
“What?” through the screen door.
I entered into darkness
And saw him sitting on the floor.
“What do YOU want?”
He asked without thought.
“No one comes here anymore!”
He seemed angry and distraught.
He looked thin and sad.
This couldn’t be the same man.
He wasn’t laughing anymore,
And had lost his golden tan.
“I live a few houses down,” I said.
“We’ve met a time or two before,
I wondered if you were ok?
I hadn’t seen you anymore.”
“I know who you are,”
He said with some pride
“You’re that pastor that prays.
We all hear you outside”
He grumbled, ” Why do you care?
All my friends have all gone.
Nothing matters anymore
And everything’s gone wrong.”
Suddenly he began to ramble
Like he hadn’t spoken for years.
And as he shared about his life
I noticed his eyes fill with tears.
“I thought I had it all,” he began,
“The joy that money can bring.
But now it doesn’t have a spark,
It doesn’t mean a thing.
One day I lost it all.
I made a wrong choice.
Lost all of my hope.”
He began to clear his voice.
“I don’t know why I’m saying this
I don’t really know you well.
But I feel I need to speak,
I need someone to tell.
I was driving too fast
Around the bend down the way.
And I lost control of the car
And I crashed it that day.”
He stared in the air
Perhaps remembering the minute
When he rolled his car
And his girlfriend was in it.
I had heard about that crash
Someone told me the next day.
I didn’t think on it more
Now I didn’t know what to say.
“I lost the girl I wanted to marry
The girl who brought me life.
What was my purpose now?
I killed my future wife.”
Silence entered into the room
I struggled with words to say
Suddenly a thought hit me
And I began it this way,
“I’m sorry for your loss.
I’m sorry for your pain.
I’m sorry nothing seems right,
And your life seems insane.
But the Lord loves you dearly.
He knew how this would end.
He knew that you needed hope.
He knew you would need a friend.”
I reached my hand out to him.
He got onto his feet.
He hugged me in tears,
Expressing his hurt and defeat.
That was ONE moment
Of many times we would share.
He opened up more each time
Realizing someone did care.
One day he met someone
Who knew him better than me.
That someone was the Lord
Who eventually set him free.
And in time he met another
Who shared his hopes and life.
That was the time I married them
And they became husband and wife.
Take the time to listen,
Take the time for prayer.
Someone might need to know
They are worthy enough for you to care.
I now know a family
Whose last name is McGee
They live down the road
A couple houses from me.
Absolutely love this
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Thank you Dana.
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This was so beautiful ❤ I absolutely loved it 🙂
I'm going to share this in my community spotlight post, it occurs at the end of the month.
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Thank you. Enjoyed writing it.
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I know the feeling, always a good feeling ❤
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Wow! That was a good story. So good it felt true, and perhaps for someone, it is.
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Thanks Mark. We are each a light for someone else to find their way to the LIGHT.
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What an awesome testimony!
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This is fictional, though I suppose we can all relate. I woke up and the words were on my tongue. Thanks for your comment.
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There are a lot of hurting people in this world who need to be shown the love, the grace, the mercy and the salvation of our Lord Jesus. He died to set us free, not just from sin, but from our burdens and our heartaches, too. He is not only our Savior, but he is our healer. And, he has the power to heal wounded hearts and minds, and to put a new song in our mouths, a song of praise to our Lord.
Thanks so much for sharing that, Beehopper. You have a gift.
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Thank you Sue. God bless.
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You are welcome. Blessings to you, too.
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Great post. It’s great that even at someone’s lowest point, God can still find them and give them comfort through someone they may not interact with.
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Amen. God always sees us and uses whatever and whomever to rescue us. Thanks for stopping by.
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I love this on so many levels! It is a wonderful narrative poem! I love the way you bookend the story with your first and last stanzas. And the story itself is so encouraging and inspiring. How many Johnny McGees do all of us know? Plenty. We can do so much simply by listening with understanding…as Christ did. Wonderful post. Thank you so much for visiting my blog and leading me here to read this amazing poem. God bless you greatly!!
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Thank you. I so desire to be a doer of the Word and not a hearer only.
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